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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UX2ogH4HATx43_pw7yuYFWBd_9mWB4lkjC5rY9gt48Q/edit The opening scene to a book I’ve been working on. Set an a place where nothing new is ever created and ideas just recirculate and degrade like copies of copies of copies. Sort of a slow apocalypse, or a new dark age. I’m trying to write stylishly but often it just turns out awkward. I really want input on prose style but all criticism is welcome. EDIT: To whoever left the comment “Format: normal text” I’m not sure what that means, but it looks like a copy paste error. animaldog fucked around with this message at 00:54 on Oct 15, 2020 |
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