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(Content Warning: this is a manga dealing with heavy topics such as child abuse, bullying, and suicide(including a depicted suicide early on). It's a compelling story and does not handle these tactlessly, so just a heads-up for any who need it.) Takopi's Original Sin (Official English) is currently running in Shounen Jump+ and as of today also runs in Manga Plus for English readers. It's a manga about the octopus-looking Takopi, an alien from a planet where everyone is happy and technology is indistinguishable from magic: Along its journey Takopi meets a troubled young girl named Shizuka on Earth in the year 2016. Seeking to bring her happiness, Takopi follows her to home and school to uncover the source of her somber expressions. The story that unveils is an exploration of human darkness that shakes the utopia-bred Takopi. But our protagonist refuses to give up. Can Takopi find happiness for children who bear the full weight of society's troubles? ----- Anyway this manga is really good. Thought I'd make a thread for people to post their impressions as new chapters come out in English. I've been following it through the Japanese releases and the mangaka Taizan 5(a rookie talent afaik) is very good at turning the blacks and whites of manga into light and darkness within the pages and the characters.
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# ? Feb 25, 2022 02:39 |
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Well. That sure was a chapter 1. Edit: and chapter 2 and 3. Ibblebibble fucked around with this message at 03:26 on Feb 25, 2022 |
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And 4 and 5.
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# ? Feb 25, 2022 04:19 |
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this is.... Good Night Punpun: The Next Generation edit: for a story as horrible as this is, it's pretty funny. Japanese stories about bullying are pretty gut-wrenching. gives me similar vibes as the novel Heaven by Mieko Kawakami. Cephas fucked around with this message at 05:19 on Feb 25, 2022 |
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Cephas posted:this is.... Good Night Punpun: The Next Generation Goodnight Punpun is easily the best comparison. Punpun is also possibly my favorite manga, and Takopi has really grabbed my attention so far. Chapter 4 is a fuckin wild ride and hits like a truck. ORIGINAL SIN
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# ? Feb 25, 2022 06:35 |
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Poor Takopi, learning what cruelty is for the first time... That feels like the first hint of something more than just 'Kind but clueless alien tries to cheer up abuse victim'.
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# ? Feb 25, 2022 16:09 |
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I’m gonna keep reading for now, but so far this just strikes me as relentless misery porn with not much to say beyond “is this hosed up or what???”
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# ? Feb 25, 2022 19:10 |
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I think it went a little too hard to be misery porn. The first chapters were to have us understand the main character's gratitude at the bully's undoing and how meaningful it was to the octopus. No idea where it goes from here ofc. I'm guessing the cover-up is going to escalate due to the manga's title.
No Wave fucked around with this message at 21:41 on Feb 25, 2022 |
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i kind of assumed this would just be discussion on the official chapters as they come, so if people are gonna discuss scan stuff i'd appreciate tags on the spoilers accordingly
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# ? Feb 25, 2022 19:52 |
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dogsicle posted:i kind of assumed this would just be discussion on the official chapters as they come, so if people are gonna discuss scan stuff i'd appreciate tags on the spoilers accordingly This
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# ? Feb 25, 2022 20:02 |
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lmao man this is really miserable
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 00:25 |
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Cephas posted:this is.... Good Night Punpun: The Next Generation I'll say. I haven't read much stuff about bullying that doesn't end with them becoming their friends in a shounen manga sense so this is really cruel for like, 9 year olds. Very engrossing though, I'm absolutely hooked on how this story resolves.
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 01:12 |
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DoubleDonut posted:I’m gonna keep reading for now, but so far this just strikes me as relentless misery porn with not much to say beyond “is this hosed up or what???” Idk this is discussing how kids are loving ruined by society and how even things meant to give them hope often cant, theres a pretty clear point.
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 01:19 |
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RareAcumen posted:I'll say. I haven't read much stuff about bullying that doesn't end with them becoming their friends in a shounen manga sense so this is really cruel for like, 9 year olds. This is what novelist Mieko Kawakami says in an interview about her novel Heaven which is about school bullying: quote:Those two characters face a very harsh reality. They have nowhere to go besides home and school, their relationships are limited, and they lack the language or the channels to seek help. They have no means of escape, no money. So it would be difficult for the narrator . . . to believe anyone who reassures him that this pain will not last; good things will come in the future. I feel like although Takopi is barely out yet, the comparisons are pretty obvious.
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 01:49 |
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DoubleDonut posted:I’m gonna keep reading for now, but so far this just strikes me as relentless misery porn with not much to say beyond “is this hosed up or what???” I don't have the greatest grasp on Japanese, but from what I understood Marina's mother finds out her daughter was killed and doesn't take it well. Which is to say it doesn't get any cheerier but it's leading to something, though if that works or not time will tell. RareAcumen posted:I'll say. I haven't read much stuff about bullying that doesn't end with them becoming their friends in a shounen manga sense so this is really cruel for like, 9 year olds. I was definitely wondering if it'd play out that way. Acerbatus fucked around with this message at 02:01 on Feb 26, 2022 |
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Endorph posted:Misery porn is when anything sad happens what society? we've met four characters and two of them have preposterously tragic backstories under very specific individual circumstances; another one is literally too stupid to know what negative emotions are. The fourth character also appears to be completely paralyzed by trauma, so I'm going to assume it's just gonna be a parade of Here's Another Ridiculously Miserable Thing until it stops being that. If you're going to do your usual bit where you're immediately hostile and dismissive to anyone who disagrees with you, you should try having an argument that actually matches the text.
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 02:27 |
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I think the first few chapters are setup for the actual start of the story, which will probably be takopi basically having to live as a miserable human child and experience suffering firsthand, to see if he can still believe in goodness afterwards. I agree that if it were to just repeat the same plot beats and tone even more, it might not amount to anything. But it looks like it is priming itself to dive into things now.
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 02:56 |
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DoubleDonut posted:what society? we've met four characters and two of them have preposterously tragic backstories under very specific individual circumstances; another one is literally too stupid to know what negative emotions are. The fourth character also appears to be completely paralyzed by trauma, so I'm going to assume it's just gonna be a parade of Here's Another Ridiculously Miserable Thing until it stops being that. If you're going to do your usual bit where you're immediately hostile and dismissive to anyone who disagrees with you, you should try having an argument that actually matches the text.
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 02:58 |
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why do people think im some kind of horrific troll with no emotions, reading poo poo like that legitimately makes me feel terrible for the rest of the day and i get it on every goddamn subforum on this site whenever i make a joke. there's dozens of people who think im some kind of inhuman monster because i teased them about chrono trigger seven years ago. why the gently caress do people's brains work this way.
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 03:00 |
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whatever, you win
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 03:01 |
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You have like fifty probations for being weirdly aggressive to people and I've literally called you out for doing it to me on multiple occasions. Maybe there's a common denominator here? Telling someone not to be hostile is not a deep personal insult
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 03:13 |
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DoubleDonut posted:what society? we've met four characters and two of them have preposterously tragic backstories under very specific individual circumstances; another one is literally too stupid to know what negative emotions are. The fourth character also appears to be completely paralyzed by trauma, so I'm going to assume it's just gonna be a parade of Here's Another Ridiculously Miserable Thing until it stops being that. If you're going to do your usual bit where you're immediately hostile and dismissive to anyone who disagrees with you, you should try having an argument that actually matches the text. I don't think Endorph was being hostile to your post, just stating her opinion on the manga. Endorph posted:why do people think im some kind of horrific troll with no emotions, reading poo poo like that legitimately makes me feel terrible for the rest of the day and i get it on every goddamn subforum on this site whenever i make a joke. there's dozens of people who think im some kind of inhuman monster because i teased them about chrono trigger seven years ago. why the gently caress do people's brains work this way. Endorph, please don't stop posting
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 03:16 |
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Endorph posted:what the gently caress dude, this was completely uncalled for. i razzed you a little i didnt do some kind of deep dive personal insult like you did. Maylooks to me like perchance people are done with your posting style of 'mechanical pieces of a story explained via a simple easy to grasp analogy' 'Humanity's endless march towards warlike self destruction and cruelty- a knight obliviously crushes an apple that has rolled into the road' Why this has evolved into eternal posting grudges, I don't know. I blame Twitter, when I don't have an example. DoubleDonut posted:You have like fifty probations for being weirdly aggressive to people and I've literally called you out for doing it to me on multiple occasions. Maybe there's a common denominator here? Wait, so now people like the moderators and trust their judgement?
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 03:57 |
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endorph is pretty consistently one of the most thoughtful posters on this website so congrats i guess on treating her so badly she left. very cool.
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 05:39 |
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"she has 50 probations for beig aggro at people" yeah, and theyre mostly from the stupid loving games mods lol. it doesnt reflect anything! i could not pick an easier subforum to get a timeout from.
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 05:40 |
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Calling someone out on being consistently hostile over nothing is treating someone badly? That's not even an insult.Kagaya Homoraisan posted:"she has 50 probations for beig aggro at people" yeah, and theyre mostly from the stupid loving games mods lol. it doesnt reflect anything! i could not pick an easier subforum to get a timeout from. This is objectively not true and you can easily look at her rap sheet to check. If Endorph can't take even the tiniest amount of criticism then she shouldn't dish out passive-aggressive garbage all the time. Like, if I'm full of poo poo and she's actually never hostile to anyone and it's just everyone against her, then why does being told "you are weirdly hostile" bother her so much she autobanned (USER WAS PUT ON PROBATION FOR THIS POST)
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 06:08 |
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On the bright(?) side Takopi is only 2 volumes long so I'm sure the discourse will improve once we have the full picture... right?
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 06:19 |
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if this is meant to be emulating punpun then it's a poor successor. it goes too far into dirge too fast and the title character's tonal dissonance with the rest of events is a one-note joke that loses its effectiveness halfway through the second chapter also the art kind of sucks but there aren't many manga that measure up to asano's stuff on that front
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 07:16 |
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Ibblebibble posted:On the bright(?) side Takopi is only 2 volumes long so I'm sure the discourse will improve once we have the full picture... right? uh i guess i try to avoid posting drama, but my 2 cents is that while endorph comes on a bit strong sometimes, she's never malicious and has some of the more thoughtful/incisive posts about media that i've seen on SA, so I hope this is a temporary posting exile
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 07:22 |
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I've seen 5 chapters because I was following this on mangadex so I'm absolutely ready to keep going. I hope this stupid little octopus can manage to succeed in his mission despite everything.
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 08:04 |
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DoubleDonut posted:Calling someone out on being consistently hostile over nothing is treating someone badly? That's not even an insult. This manga is bleak as hell so thank you for providing some funny forums drama
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 08:21 |
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if you are going to make a miserable manga you gotta make the art good and the art here just aint good
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 08:30 |
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imo the art style works as a reflection of takopi’s view of the world. Takopi is an innocent happy alien trying to process really grim stuff
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 13:02 |
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so it views everyone with giant blocky heads and pez-dispenser necks?
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 14:06 |
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Willo567 posted:Endorph, please don't stop posting
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Oxxidation posted:so it views everyone with giant blocky heads and pez-dispenser necks? yes
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 19:36 |
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I like the art
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# ? Feb 26, 2022 20:08 |
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Willo567 posted:Endorph, please don't stop posting
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# ? Feb 27, 2022 02:35 |
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gently caress this thread and all who post in it if Endorph left the site because someone had to be a shitlord
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# ? Feb 28, 2022 22:37 |
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# ? May 2, 2024 10:07 |
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DoubleDonut posted:Calling someone out on being consistently hostile over nothing is treating someone badly? That's not even an insult. Oh it was you specifically, I retract what I said about the thread, go gently caress yourself (USER WAS PUT ON PROBATION FOR THIS POST)
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# ? Feb 28, 2022 22:44 |