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Space Flower
Sep 10, 2014

by Games Forum
(Content Warning: this is a manga dealing with heavy topics such as child abuse, bullying, and suicide(including a depicted suicide early on). It's a compelling story and does not handle these tactlessly, so just a heads-up for any who need it.)



Takopi's Original Sin (Official English) is currently running in Shounen Jump+ and as of today also runs in Manga Plus for English readers.
It's a manga about the octopus-looking Takopi, an alien from a planet where everyone is happy and technology is indistinguishable from magic:


Along its journey Takopi meets a troubled young girl named Shizuka on Earth in the year 2016. Seeking to bring her happiness, Takopi follows her to home and school to uncover the source of her somber expressions.



The story that unveils is an exploration of human darkness that shakes the utopia-bred Takopi. But our protagonist refuses to give up.



Can Takopi find happiness for children who bear the full weight of society's troubles?

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Anyway this manga is really good. Thought I'd make a thread for people to post their impressions as new chapters come out in English. I've been following it through the Japanese releases and the mangaka Taizan 5(a rookie talent afaik) is very good at turning the blacks and whites of manga into light and darkness within the pages and the characters.

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Ibblebibble
Nov 12, 2013

Well.

That sure was a chapter 1.

Edit: and chapter 2 and 3.

Ibblebibble fucked around with this message at 03:26 on Feb 25, 2022

Captain Invictus
Apr 5, 2005

Try reading some manga!


Clever Betty
And 4 and 5.

Cephas
May 11, 2009

Humanity's real enemy is me!
Hya hya foowah!
this is.... Good Night Punpun: The Next Generation

edit: for a story as horrible as this is, it's pretty funny. Japanese stories about bullying are pretty gut-wrenching. gives me similar vibes as the novel Heaven by Mieko Kawakami.

Cephas fucked around with this message at 05:19 on Feb 25, 2022

CodfishCartographer
Feb 23, 2010

Gadus Maprocephalus

Pillbug

Cephas posted:

this is.... Good Night Punpun: The Next Generation

Goodnight Punpun is easily the best comparison.

Punpun is also possibly my favorite manga, and Takopi has really grabbed my attention so far. Chapter 4 is a fuckin wild ride and hits like a truck.

ORIGINAL SIN

Elfface
Nov 14, 2010

Da-na-na-na-na-na-na
IRON JONAH
Poor Takopi, learning what cruelty is for the first time... That feels like the first hint of something more than just 'Kind but clueless alien tries to cheer up abuse victim'.

DoubleDonut
Oct 22, 2010


Fallen Rib
I’m gonna keep reading for now, but so far this just strikes me as relentless misery porn with not much to say beyond “is this hosed up or what???”

No Wave
Sep 18, 2005

HA! HA! NICE! WHAT A TOOL!
I think it went a little too hard to be misery porn. The first chapters were to have us understand the main character's gratitude at the bully's undoing and how meaningful it was to the octopus. No idea where it goes from here ofc. I'm guessing the cover-up is going to escalate due to the manga's title.

No Wave fucked around with this message at 21:41 on Feb 25, 2022

dogsicle
Oct 23, 2012

i kind of assumed this would just be discussion on the official chapters as they come, so if people are gonna discuss scan stuff i'd appreciate tags on the spoilers accordingly

Namtab
Feb 22, 2010

dogsicle posted:

i kind of assumed this would just be discussion on the official chapters as they come, so if people are gonna discuss scan stuff i'd appreciate tags on the spoilers accordingly

This

Plutonis
Mar 25, 2011

lmao man this is really miserable

RareAcumen
Dec 28, 2012




Cephas posted:

this is.... Good Night Punpun: The Next Generation
edit: for a story as horrible as this is, it's pretty funny. Japanese stories about bullying are pretty gut-wrenching.

I'll say. I haven't read much stuff about bullying that doesn't end with them becoming their friends in a shounen manga sense so this is really cruel for like, 9 year olds.

Very engrossing though, I'm absolutely hooked on how this story resolves.

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

DoubleDonut posted:

I’m gonna keep reading for now, but so far this just strikes me as relentless misery porn with not much to say beyond “is this hosed up or what???”
Misery porn is when anything sad happens

Idk this is discussing how kids are loving ruined by society and how even things meant to give them hope often cant, theres a pretty clear point.

Cephas
May 11, 2009

Humanity's real enemy is me!
Hya hya foowah!

RareAcumen posted:

I'll say. I haven't read much stuff about bullying that doesn't end with them becoming their friends in a shounen manga sense so this is really cruel for like, 9 year olds.

Very engrossing though, I'm absolutely hooked on how this story resolves.

This is what novelist Mieko Kawakami says in an interview about her novel Heaven which is about school bullying:

quote:

Those two characters face a very harsh reality. They have nowhere to go besides home and school, their relationships are limited, and they lack the language or the channels to seek help. They have no means of escape, no money. So it would be difficult for the narrator . . . to believe anyone who reassures him that this pain will not last; good things will come in the future.

The question of how we can believe in goodness in such a situation is very difficult. In Japan, every year, many children take their own lives on the last day of summer vacation. Whether the adults knew what was happening to them or not, in the end we cannot change the children’s reality that made them make such a choice.

This novel deals with the subject of bullying in schools, but there are countless children suffering at home from poverty or abuse, living in hell. There are also children who might be financially stable, but are so controlled by their parents that they lack the minimum self-esteem to survive. These children may appear unharmed, but inside they are scarred and can barely breathe.

. . . As a writer, I feel it is necessary to forcefully write the extreme about good or evil. If I can portray a moment with full intensity, whatever the subject may be, the reader will come face to face with the strong light that is born in that moment, as well as its dark shadow.

Hope exists not only in happy stories where everyone feels safe. And despair is found not only in tragedies. Whatever shape they take, it is in the experience of coming into contact with extreme expressions that shakes the very foundation of what we consider right and wrong, our values, and our sensibilities. It opens the door to another world, even outside of books. I believe that it is my mission to continue to write works that provide such experiences.

I feel like although Takopi is barely out yet, the comparisons are pretty obvious.

Acerbatus
Jun 26, 2020

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS

DoubleDonut posted:

I’m gonna keep reading for now, but so far this just strikes me as relentless misery porn with not much to say beyond “is this hosed up or what???”


I don't have the greatest grasp on Japanese, but from what I understood Marina's mother finds out her daughter was killed and doesn't take it well. Which is to say it doesn't get any cheerier but it's leading to something, though if that works or not time will tell.


RareAcumen posted:

I'll say. I haven't read much stuff about bullying that doesn't end with them becoming their friends in a shounen manga sense so this is really cruel for like, 9 year olds.

Very engrossing though, I'm absolutely hooked on how this story resolves.

I was definitely wondering if it'd play out that way.

Acerbatus fucked around with this message at 02:01 on Feb 26, 2022

DoubleDonut
Oct 22, 2010


Fallen Rib

Endorph posted:

Misery porn is when anything sad happens

Idk this is discussing how kids are loving ruined by society and how even things meant to give them hope often cant, theres a pretty clear point.


what society? we've met four characters and two of them have preposterously tragic backstories under very specific individual circumstances; another one is literally too stupid to know what negative emotions are. The fourth character also appears to be completely paralyzed by trauma, so I'm going to assume it's just gonna be a parade of Here's Another Ridiculously Miserable Thing until it stops being that. If you're going to do your usual bit where you're immediately hostile and dismissive to anyone who disagrees with you, you should try having an argument that actually matches the text.

Cephas
May 11, 2009

Humanity's real enemy is me!
Hya hya foowah!
I think the first few chapters are setup for the actual start of the story, which will probably be takopi basically having to live as a miserable human child and experience suffering firsthand, to see if he can still believe in goodness afterwards.

I agree that if it were to just repeat the same plot beats and tone even more, it might not amount to anything. But it looks like it is priming itself to dive into things now.

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

DoubleDonut posted:

what society? we've met four characters and two of them have preposterously tragic backstories under very specific individual circumstances; another one is literally too stupid to know what negative emotions are. The fourth character also appears to be completely paralyzed by trauma, so I'm going to assume it's just gonna be a parade of Here's Another Ridiculously Miserable Thing until it stops being that. If you're going to do your usual bit where you're immediately hostile and dismissive to anyone who disagrees with you, you should try having an argument that actually matches the text.
what the gently caress dude, this was completely uncalled for. i razzed you a little i didnt do some kind of deep dive personal insult like you did.

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

why do people think im some kind of horrific troll with no emotions, reading poo poo like that legitimately makes me feel terrible for the rest of the day and i get it on every goddamn subforum on this site whenever i make a joke. there's dozens of people who think im some kind of inhuman monster because i teased them about chrono trigger seven years ago. why the gently caress do people's brains work this way.

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

whatever, you win

DoubleDonut
Oct 22, 2010


Fallen Rib
You have like fifty probations for being weirdly aggressive to people and I've literally called you out for doing it to me on multiple occasions. Maybe there's a common denominator here?

Telling someone not to be hostile is not a deep personal insult

Willo567
Feb 5, 2015

Cheating helped me fail the test and stay on the show.

DoubleDonut posted:

what society? we've met four characters and two of them have preposterously tragic backstories under very specific individual circumstances; another one is literally too stupid to know what negative emotions are. The fourth character also appears to be completely paralyzed by trauma, so I'm going to assume it's just gonna be a parade of Here's Another Ridiculously Miserable Thing until it stops being that. If you're going to do your usual bit where you're immediately hostile and dismissive to anyone who disagrees with you, you should try having an argument that actually matches the text.

I don't think Endorph was being hostile to your post, just stating her opinion on the manga.

Endorph posted:

why do people think im some kind of horrific troll with no emotions, reading poo poo like that legitimately makes me feel terrible for the rest of the day and i get it on every goddamn subforum on this site whenever i make a joke. there's dozens of people who think im some kind of inhuman monster because i teased them about chrono trigger seven years ago. why the gently caress do people's brains work this way.

Endorph, please don't stop posting

RareAcumen
Dec 28, 2012




Endorph posted:

what the gently caress dude, this was completely uncalled for. i razzed you a little i didnt do some kind of deep dive personal insult like you did.

Maylooks to me like perchance people are done with your posting style of 'mechanical pieces of a story explained via a simple easy to grasp analogy'
'Humanity's endless march towards warlike self destruction and cruelty- a knight obliviously crushes an apple that has rolled into the road'

Why this has evolved into eternal posting grudges, I don't know. I blame Twitter, when I don't have an example.

DoubleDonut posted:

You have like fifty probations for being weirdly aggressive to people and I've literally called you out for doing it to me on multiple occasions. Maybe there's a common denominator here?

Telling someone not to be hostile is not a deep personal insult

Wait, so now people like the moderators and trust their judgement?

Kagaya Homoraisan
Aug 28, 2019

You say, run away
Instead, you get scared
For the way that I feel
Drops out into all this disorder
endorph is pretty consistently one of the most thoughtful posters on this website so congrats i guess on treating her so badly she left. very cool.

Kagaya Homoraisan
Aug 28, 2019

You say, run away
Instead, you get scared
For the way that I feel
Drops out into all this disorder
"she has 50 probations for beig aggro at people" yeah, and theyre mostly from the stupid loving games mods lol. it doesnt reflect anything! i could not pick an easier subforum to get a timeout from.

DoubleDonut
Oct 22, 2010


Fallen Rib
Calling someone out on being consistently hostile over nothing is treating someone badly? That's not even an insult.

Kagaya Homoraisan posted:

"she has 50 probations for beig aggro at people" yeah, and theyre mostly from the stupid loving games mods lol. it doesnt reflect anything! i could not pick an easier subforum to get a timeout from.

This is objectively not true and you can easily look at her rap sheet to check. If Endorph can't take even the tiniest amount of criticism then she shouldn't dish out passive-aggressive garbage all the time.

Like, if I'm full of poo poo and she's actually never hostile to anyone and it's just everyone against her, then why does being told "you are weirdly hostile" bother her so much she autobanned

(USER WAS PUT ON PROBATION FOR THIS POST)

Ibblebibble
Nov 12, 2013

On the bright(?) side Takopi is only 2 volumes long so I'm sure the discourse will improve once we have the full picture... right?

Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007
if this is meant to be emulating punpun then it's a poor successor. it goes too far into dirge too fast and the title character's tonal dissonance with the rest of events is a one-note joke that loses its effectiveness halfway through the second chapter

also the art kind of sucks but there aren't many manga that measure up to asano's stuff on that front

Apraxin
Feb 22, 2006

General-Admiral

Ibblebibble posted:

On the bright(?) side Takopi is only 2 volumes long so I'm sure the discourse will improve once we have the full picture... right?
I'd been on the side of 'ah, this just too relentlessly dark and/or edgy for me to enjoy', but chapters 11 and 12 which are the most recently released in japan and the apparent end of the first arc are a real curveball about what the 'true' plot is so i'm interested again.

uh i guess i try to avoid posting drama, but my 2 cents is that while endorph comes on a bit strong sometimes, she's never malicious and has some of the more thoughtful/incisive posts about media that i've seen on SA, so I hope this is a temporary posting exile

RareAcumen
Dec 28, 2012




I've seen 5 chapters because I was following this on mangadex so I'm absolutely ready to keep going. I hope this stupid little octopus can manage to succeed in his mission despite everything. :allears:

Jose
Jul 24, 2007

Adrian Chiles is a broadcaster and writer

DoubleDonut posted:

Calling someone out on being consistently hostile over nothing is treating someone badly? That's not even an insult.

This is objectively not true and you can easily look at her rap sheet to check. If Endorph can't take even the tiniest amount of criticism then she shouldn't dish out passive-aggressive garbage all the time.

Like, if I'm full of poo poo and she's actually never hostile to anyone and it's just everyone against her, then why does being told "you are weirdly hostile" bother her so much she autobanned

This manga is bleak as hell so thank you for providing some funny forums drama

Ringo Roadagain
Mar 27, 2010

if you are going to make a miserable manga you gotta make the art good and the art here just aint good

Erg
Oct 31, 2010

imo the art style works as a reflection of takopi’s view of the world. Takopi is an innocent happy alien trying to process really grim stuff

Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007
so it views everyone with giant blocky heads and pez-dispenser necks?

Last Celebration
Mar 30, 2010

Willo567 posted:

Endorph, please don't stop posting

Vitamean
May 31, 2012

Oxxidation posted:

so it views everyone with giant blocky heads and pez-dispenser necks?

yes

CodfishCartographer
Feb 23, 2010

Gadus Maprocephalus

Pillbug
I like the art

Mokinokaro
Sep 11, 2001

At the end of everything, hold onto anything



Fun Shoe

Willo567 posted:

Endorph, please don't stop posting

TheKingofSprings
Oct 9, 2012
gently caress this thread and all who post in it if Endorph left the site because someone had to be a shitlord

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TheKingofSprings
Oct 9, 2012

DoubleDonut posted:

Calling someone out on being consistently hostile over nothing is treating someone badly? That's not even an insult.

This is objectively not true and you can easily look at her rap sheet to check. If Endorph can't take even the tiniest amount of criticism then she shouldn't dish out passive-aggressive garbage all the time.

Like, if I'm full of poo poo and she's actually never hostile to anyone and it's just everyone against her, then why does being told "you are weirdly hostile" bother her so much she autobanned

(USER WAS PUT ON PROBATION FOR THIS POST)

Oh it was you specifically,

I retract what I said about the thread, go gently caress yourself

(USER WAS PUT ON PROBATION FOR THIS POST)

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