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i like that the most interesting part, them interacting for the first time and getting used to each other, is completely skipped over. even in terms of a oneshot i feel like you could easily use more time with that.t that said story/dialog isnt the only thing these awards judge. the art is competent. the paneling kind of sucks rear end tho but the artist at least kind of has an idea how to put together a story. when you're dealing with the kind of contests that high schoolers and people who absolutely cannot draw enter, that can be enough to carry something even if the story they put together sucks.
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# ¿ Dec 27, 2022 15:07 |
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# ¿ May 11, 2024 10:58 |