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PoptartsNinja posted:But can Mary turn herself so invisible we'll forget she's murdering people like Allison did? What if Mary is constantly following Alison around, but has become so intangible that Alison never notices she sitting on Mary when she needs to pee?
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Aug 25, 2017 13:11
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There are the building blocks of a very interesting story here. The Asperger's Telepath, SJW SuperWoMan, Redneck Wolverine, and The Softest Boy. But.
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Aug 25, 2017 13:39
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Aug 25, 2017 13:57
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Serene Dragon posted:She got the ability to fly in the murder all rapists chapter, which was before she met Max. In fact, she used her new flight powers to save him from a burning building. Also Furnace started losing stability days if not weeks before that. And I believe Mary's ability to make projections was an evolution as well since originally she could only become invisible. It would be nice if this plot point stayed around and fed into something but all the other plot points are too vague at the moment to be used. Maybe the congresswoman stating that the world was waiting to see if Biodynamics can pass their genes on was onto something? It would be interesting to see a reveal where the gene is shown to be too unstable and after this single generation humanity will revert back to normal. Would be interesting to see how Allison deals with that revelation. Especially since her organization will presumably only recruit biodynamic women as the escorts.
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Aug 25, 2017 14:47
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Yes Yes this is how you handle this scene Yes Clevin No Clevin don't worry, that's just the man she's physically attracted to instead of the tiny little gently caress boy she settled for You're fine Clevin don't worry God I want Patrick to wake up, screech at Clevin, and it's revealed Clevin is some shape shifting monster in disguise. The real Clevin died on that roof top years-months-weeks-days ago! (How long has it been?)
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Aug 25, 2017 14:53
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Patrick's going to read Clevin's mind and either... 1) 2) discover that Clevin is perfect and Allison's true love. Patrick will eventually kill himself, knowing he will never be as soft as Clevin.
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Aug 25, 2017 16:25
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pospysyl posted:Patrick's going to read Clevin's mind and either... 3) instantly go back to sleep because Clevin's mind is the most boring thing imaginable.
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Aug 25, 2017 17:12
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Clevin will make them pasta
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Aug 25, 2017 17:14
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Cat Mattress posted:3) instantly go back to sleep because Clevin's mind is the most boring thing imaginable. 4) Clevin will leave again before Patrick regains consciousness.
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Aug 25, 2017 17:16
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I think we're all missing what's really going to happen here Patrick is going to fall in love with Clevin because he's THAT NICE A GUY, and they're going to enter a threeway relationship
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Aug 25, 2017 17:18
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Clevin's mind is a pastel void.
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Aug 25, 2017 17:22
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I think this new edgy material should be made into a cartoon. First episode: Can I cook you pasta? A 30 minute discussion whether it is right for the perfect being given male form can touch the plate of the female superhero. My choice for VA: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KS6f1MKpLGM
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Aug 25, 2017 18:33
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Burkion posted:I think we're all missing what's really going to happen here No way. Allison is getting the boot.
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Aug 25, 2017 18:51
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Galvanik posted:Does anyone else think it's kind of weird that this program to protect women from abusive partners is named after the women who served a male god by ferrying male warriors, many of whom were rapist murderers themselves, into viking paradise? I was going to put up a big whole thing in the comments about how Appropriating Valkyries from Viking Culture in this way was kind of an odd thing for a Social Justice webcomic to do, but I don't think anyone would have got it.
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Amazon would make WAY more sense but Well I don't think they're going to be able to trademark that one
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The biggest thing about the app is it kind of ignores a lot of the organizations in place and even better shelters for women of abuse. Ignoring the fact that it ignores trans, gender queer and men who also experience abuse, it simply put doesn't do the biggest thing that Allison could have done. It could easily be simply that Allison becomes the face of something like i don't know that took 5 seconds googling: http://dawnrising.org/ DAWN. And it comes with a better even positive name compared to valkyries which kind of has this weird the abused are combatants. Its poo poo basically.
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Aug 25, 2017 19:21
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Like if you wanted to keep the mythology theme and make it about protecting people why not just call it Aegis? Or like Artemis/Diana whose domains included "Protector of women". loving read a book.
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Aug 25, 2017 19:22
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ZenMasterBullshit posted:Like if you wanted to keep the mythology theme and make it about protecting people why not just call it Aegis? But those aren't cool names that make it better when Clevin makes more spaghetti and takes care of people she is actually attracted too. Being the humble and best servant showing how his saintlike timidness is all that can show. Can't have a goddess name, since then it would shine light away from our lord and savior Clevin.
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Aug 25, 2017 19:25
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Clevin will remove his mask, revealing forums poster idonotlikepeas. This is part of their Patreon pledge tier.
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Aug 25, 2017 19:28
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Valkyries frequently appear in Japanese anime and RPGs. That is the standard being applied here, and it's a good one.
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Aug 25, 2017 19:29
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Typical Pubbie posted:Valkyries frequently appear in Japanese anime and RPGs. That is the standard being applied here, and it's a good one. Hey Valkeryie profile is cool and good but even there the protag's whole shtick was she was being forced into slavery and sacrifice to Odin and that's bad and her job sucked. This poo poo doesn't even fit those standards
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Aug 25, 2017 19:34
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ZenMasterBullshit posted:Hey Valkeryie profile is cool and good but even there the protag's whole shtick was she was being forced into slavery and sacrifice to Odin and that's bad and her job sucked. Lets just say it, the name choice was "Valkyries are women with armor and weapons right?! That is something that would work on this comic, then i can introduce me... i mean this new vibrant character that will be the everyman of the story."
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Aug 25, 2017 19:39
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Should have called it Shieldmaiden
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Aug 25, 2017 20:03
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Aug 25, 2017 20:42
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No, a shieldclevin, also known as the common box turtle
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Aug 25, 2017 20:55
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Remember when Allison's roommate kicked her out because she didn't feel like her room was a safe space with Allison around? Kind of funny in retrospect after what happened with Max.
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BravestOfTheLamps posted:Clevin will remove his mask, revealing forums poster idonotlikepeas. This is part of their Patreon pledge tier. lmao
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ZenMasterBullshit posted:Like if you wanted to keep the mythology theme and make it about protecting people why not just call it Aegis?
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Aug 25, 2017 21:31
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corn in the bible posted:Clevin will make them pasta And tea!
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Aug 25, 2017 22:02
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Welcome to Clevin's Pasta and Tea. Are you ready to order? Sorry, we're out of tea. Maybe I can interest you in pasta?
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pospysyl posted:Patrick's going to read Clevin's mind and either... Or get trapped in it forever and become the patriclevin.
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Maybe this is like total recall, and patrick is here to save Allison from her Clevinverse. She will deny him though as she must, and the last page of the comic is white as they correctly lobotomize her.
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Aug 26, 2017 02:21
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Aug 26, 2017 02:53
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Clevin will embalm him in only the finest lasagna.
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Aug 26, 2017 03:23
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clevin walked out. realised he'd forgotten his phone. walked back. in this time a smelly man could burst into the apartment, get showered and changed, and have a long conversation. why didn't clevin just go to the store? and if he did, why did he announce he's forgotten his phone?
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Aug 26, 2017 10:54
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DOWN JACKET FETISH posted:clevin walked out. realised he'd forgotten his phone. walked back. He'd actually just been standing there quietly the whole time because he never left and just now wanted to announce his presence.
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DOWN JACKET FETISH posted:clevin walked out. realised he'd forgotten his phone. walked back. His Clevin senses tingled, using his super power to immediately know the most timid and humble way to be was at his apartment he was teleported to the front door.
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Axe-man posted:His Clevin senses chuck tingled
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