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I hope all of this abruptly ends as Clevin hits Patrick in the skull with a brick inside of a box of Bertoli pasta
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# ? Apr 27, 2018 15:16 |
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# ? Jun 8, 2024 08:03 |
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this is so much better than anything I would have expected
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# ? Apr 27, 2018 15:23 |
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# ? Apr 27, 2018 15:49 |
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Alison is sooo into this she is in pain.
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# ? Apr 27, 2018 15:55 |
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I knew that face reminded me of someone.
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# ? Apr 27, 2018 16:14 |
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this is extremely haram
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# ? Apr 27, 2018 18:36 |
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a cartoon duck posted:I like the part where Allison stares at Patrick for the horrible crime of rewiring someone's brain to fix their issues without her consent, with absolutely no self-reflection. Okay but they're actually gonna address it right they have to be aware of this right they didn't get how the libertarian abuse looked like rape but they'll get this, RIGHT please??
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# ? Apr 27, 2018 22:15 |
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Allison can do no wrong, that is why Clevin is the main character, cause he has flaws. His pasta is too soft.
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# ? Apr 27, 2018 22:32 |
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# ? Apr 27, 2018 23:46 |
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# ? Apr 28, 2018 01:41 |
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Paladinus posted:I knew that face reminded me of someone. now she just looks like a member of the gorillaz
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# ? Apr 28, 2018 01:46 |
corn in the bible posted:now she just looks like a member of the gorillaz real big dad real big dad making pasta and it won't take long
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# ? Apr 28, 2018 03:37 |
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Babysitter Super Sleuth posted:real big dad nice
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 00:29 |
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I'm assuming he literally accidentally gutted her like a fish and everything she's doing now is because he's subconsciously puppeting her and he doesn't want to think about his dead dad and also wants to be treated like he's still 6.
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 16:57 |
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No, that would be a good story actually
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 17:28 |
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Why do you think the writer would be anything but dogshit, given previous form
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 17:36 |
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Flesh Forge posted:No, that would be a good story actually The story they're currently telling has all the beats of a good story, as the broken young telepath proceeds to break everything even worse. It's just not working because it's going to a bunch of really uncomfortable places, and people are refusing to engage with it because they no longer trust the author to handle it elegantly. I really can't imagine going through the Anthony Carver Returns arc in Gunnerkrigg Court if I hadn't absolutely trusted Tom Siddell to handle what was going on to my satisfaction.
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 19:28 |
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I agree there's a setup that could go somewhere very interesting, but it's been like a dozen times now there's been a setup that could go somewhere very interesting and instead Clevin makes pasta and tea, Robot Leg Lady hears Dream Weaver and blushes, Fish Girl disappears and is never seen again
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 19:31 |
Rand Brittain posted:The story they're currently telling has all the beats of a good story, as the broken young telepath proceeds to break everything even worse. Gunnerkrig Court reads better in collected long form than as a daily. This chapter of SFP will be completely incomprehensible in collected long form.
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 21:20 |
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And then they ate cookies with milk end everything was good forever. The End.
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 21:29 |
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Old Kentucky Shark posted:It's just not well done. People aren't just refusing to engage with it out of lack of trust, there's not much good to engage with. There is zero logical or tonal follow-through. "Please, think well of me," was actually a pretty good line, and "Here is a knife, stab my father" could have been a good scenario in a totally different story, but to have one follow the other in the same story, let alone within a page of each other, is loving idiotic. Quiet! Quiet now!
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 21:59 |
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Gentle reminder that this is a universe wherein in the context of a support group people were barred for saying the word 'body', because there was a metahuman present who had transformed into a cloud of gas, and the word 'body' was triggering for her. No no-one else could use it even when referring to their own.
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 22:51 |
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Breetai posted:Gentle reminder that this is a universe wherein in the context of a support group people were barred for saying the word 'body', because there was a metahuman present who had transformed into a cloud of gas, and the word 'body' was triggering for her. No no-one else could use it even when referring to their own.
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 23:00 |
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If he just forced empathy into his mother, wouldn't she go mad from the fact that she just murdered her husband?
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# ? Apr 29, 2018 23:14 |
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i think she forgot, because it's been a couple weeks since that happened
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 00:32 |
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Rand Brittain posted:The story they're currently telling has all the beats of a good story, as the broken young telepath proceeds to break everything even worse. no actually it sucks. There is not the seed of anything good at the heart of this, it's a bunch of amazingly dire garbage written by a moron.
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 00:49 |
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Rand Brittain posted:The story they're currently telling has all the beats of a good story, as the broken young telepath proceeds to break everything even worse. There's absolutely nothing uncomfortable about this story except the author's neck from being crammed so far up his own rear end.
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 00:56 |
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i am the writer of sfp
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 01:20 |
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That's impossible, the mightiness of vaginas hasn't been brought up a single time.
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 02:17 |
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LMAO can't loving forget treating the viewpoint of a TERF as a totally equally reasonable thing that needed to be respected just the same as the opinion of the trans person the TERF went off on and kicked out of a women's group, while having the trans person be portrayed as a literal man in a dress who was identifying as a man at the moment because someone yelled at him and he was scared. Is that how Mulligan thinks being nonbinary works...? Like that it just shifts based on external pressures? What an rear end in a top hat. Like yeah it might not have been Allison's place to step into that argument when she's also an outsider there but just the fact that argument was portrayed is ridiculous.
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 03:25 |
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Wonder what would happen if Max Power sprinkled his magical glitter dust on that particular character
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 14:03 |
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Flesh Forge posted:Wonder what would happen if Max Power sprinkled his magical glitter dust on that particular character Clevin
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 17:57 |
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PetraCore posted:LMAO can't loving forget treating the viewpoint of a TERF as a totally equally reasonable thing that needed to be respected just the same as the opinion of the trans person the TERF went off on and kicked out of a women's group, while having the trans person be portrayed as a literal man in a dress who was identifying as a man at the moment because someone yelled at him and he was scared. i actually did forget that, because most of this comic is very forgettable it's mostly of use as a contrast to Kill Six Billion Demons, the other "alison tries to solve things with violence" comic
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 22:50 |
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oh new page by the way
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 23:11 |
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Lol AND lol
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 23:14 |
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From the commentsquote:(and this story is both more coherent and way more original than the average superhero comic, so we count our blessings and all that) bolding mine. Yeesh.
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 23:44 |
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I love love love how innocently Patrick says the words "father is dead" like he's the sane voice of reason here. Like he had nothing to do with it. Yes he's dead, Patrick, you killed him!
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 23:45 |
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I laughed, then I assumed they were going for pathos and laughed even harder.
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 23:46 |
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Oh right the comment section is culled to the point that only the most devoted remain
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# ? Apr 30, 2018 23:55 |
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# ? Jun 8, 2024 08:03 |
Uncle Wemus posted:Oh right the comment section is culled to the point that only the most devoted remain There's like one person left who's angry about this turn of events. Last page they had a huge post about how upset they were that they finally got moderated for posting a comment.
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# ? May 1, 2018 00:41 |