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avshalemon posted:what sort of damage would a shotgun blast at 10ft (or two shotgun blasts, to be specific) do to the human torso anyway? i need to know in decent detail for a book but i'm having trouble finding a specific description of what it would look like for a book, uh huh
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the more damage the better, the character ideally comes back from the dead as a horrific golem with alien cacti spilling out of their empty chest cavity so that's the type of effect i'm looking for
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Ah, Sealab 2021. Good stuff. Welcome to the page.
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Jul 8, 2018 00:18
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Chelb posted:for a book, uh huh
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first, i will remove my womb and consecrate it on a fiery altar
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avshalemon posted:what sort of damage would a shotgun blast at 10ft (or two shotgun blasts, to be specific) do to the human torso anyway? i need to know in decent detail for a book but i'm having trouble finding a specific description of what it would look like https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rhZf_x8Esms Ballistic gel target but regardless it ain't gonna be pretty.
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Party Plane Jones posted:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rhZf_x8Esms this is legitimately for a work of fiction please don't permaban me again
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avshalemon posted:the more damage the better, the character ideally comes back from the dead as a horrific golem with alien cacti spilling out of their empty chest cavity so that's the type of effect i'm looking for  well what a shotgun gonna do is give ya a good spread. real nice spread. but it sound like to me what yer lookin fer is a fifty calibur. that sumbitch'll do the job.
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Jul 8, 2018 00:23
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the rum is gone rum, i hardly knew ye
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Chelb posted:im unhappy with any resident pig that does not ultimately become pork belly for my chinese recipes pork is the finest of the meat animals also eat it before it eats you, bread childe
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Jul 8, 2018 00:25
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ArfJason posted:Birth Year Page Post
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That's not possible. Stop with the trolling or I'll call the cops.
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Volkerball posted:
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Jul 8, 2018 00:27
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in local news an indonesian fusion restaurant very recently opened up in brownsville which is  im never letting it go
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Jul 8, 2018 00:28
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there used to be a jamaican place in McAllen i never got around to visiting and then it closed i'll always keep you in my heart, jamaican place
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avshalemon posted:thank you creepy uncle volkerball, unfortunately it's got to be something that a well-connected sassy teen could conceivably find on the black market so i think i'll just go with a shotgun and settle for less gore is it not set in america
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avshalemon posted:the more damage the better, the character ideally comes back from the dead as a horrific golem with alien cacti spilling out of their empty chest cavity so that's the type of effect i'm looking for look up pumpkin ball and foster slugs
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i don't really care about this detail all that much and would be satisfied just to say "he got shot, end of story" but gun nerds are the most insufferable people on the planet and if you put a gun in a book you have to get it exactly right or nerds piss all over themselves
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Volkerball posted:is it not set in america
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avshalemon posted:i don't really care about this detail all that much and would be satisfied just to say "he got shot, end of story" but gun nerds are the most insufferable people on the planet and if you put a gun in a book you have to get it exactly right or nerds piss all over themselves alternatively, embrace it
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avshalemon posted:why would it be set in america if it's not set in america you open yourself to the vast world of improvised weapons that the rest of the world enjoys
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"the clips rapidly ejected as the shotgatt let loose its one hundred caliber rounds at blinding speed"
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EVERY DETAIL IN A NARRATIVE HAS TO BE FUNCTIONAL TO THE PLOT OR CHARACTERIZATION!!!!!
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ArfJason posted:Ah, Sealab 2021. Good stuff. Welcome to the page. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=va919Tcd9Hc
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then just say he got don't argued by a fockin stingray when he was havin a slash in the ocean and when he drifted back to the beach the fockin dingos had a fair go at him
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Jul 8, 2018 00:35
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i might just say "a gun" lol, gently caress it
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ArfJason posted:EVERY DETAIL IN A NARRATIVE HAS TO BE FUNCTIONAL TO THE PLOT OR CHARACTERIZATION!!!!! if I were an editor I would be crossing out your posts with a red pen
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Volkerball posted:then just say he got don't argued by a fockin stingray when he was havin a slash in the ocean and when he drifted back to the beach the fockin dingos had a fair go at him
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Chelb posted:if I were an editor I would be crossing out your posts with a red pen all my posts are functional either to the plot (they advance the story) or characterizaiton (help to construct a 29 year old virgin with munchausen's, strep throat, skin that looks like someone just ripped off years old bandages, childish loud who spit while talking, lying to policeman)
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Jul 8, 2018 00:39
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the only problem i have is rating the men second place men are deffo ranked way lower
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avshalemon posted:i might just say "a gun" lol, gently caress it you're missing an opportunity to use one of these handy numbers as plot device  edit:  this number and its backstory quote:This .380 automatic pistol was brandished on construction workers by a man living in a shipping container on site who had on several occasions entered the firm saying he could not stand the noise and dust that the trucks were making. After being arrested he told police that he had originally built the gun to defend himself. Party Plane Jones fucked around with this message at 00:47 on Jul 8, 2018 |
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Party Plane Jones posted:you're missing an opportunity to use one of these handy numbers as plot device 
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mizz rosie oi think somethin' be movin' in that big 'ole in dis vermins chest! ho burr tis spoiky loik a hedgepig!
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i say, that's no hedgepig me ol' chum. it's a cactus! angry lookin chap wot wot
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Party Plane Jones posted:edit: The argentinian standard issue
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avshalemon posted:the more damage the better, the character ideally comes back from the dead as a horrific golem with alien cacti spilling out of their empty chest cavity so that's the type of effect i'm looking for the fun thing about writing is that it doesn't have to be realistic
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alternatively if you must have an giant chest cavity hole just say they ate an RPG-7 round before it reached its arming distance
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Chelb posted:there used to be a jamaican place in McAllen i never got around to visiting and then it closed jamican food brings the heat in a major way the only stuff that i've had that's comparable is northen thai food. the kind of heat where by the end of the meal you're just a sweating mess
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